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cobre says

Bien hecho, Vivra.

Yo tambien fui estudar  solo por méses que me puedo contar en los dedos, así que en veces tomes mi comentario con sal.

I too have only been studying for months that I can count on my fingers, so take my comments with  a grain of salt.

Creo en el primer párrafo  hiciste todos bien, pero es más de las frases cortas. Unas hispanohablante vayan agreguen algunos de estos.

I think the first paragraph is well written but there are many short sentences. A Spanish speaker would combine some of them.

En el secundo párrafo, me usare "por almorzar y en la fin ..."

In the second paragraph, I would use "por" lunch and "en la" end . . .

Porque la hora de almorzar es un período de tiempo y unos se puede cambiar o durante o por.
y "en la" porque es solo una parte poca de la fin de semana que tú lo hiciste.

because lunch hour is a period of time and one can interchange either during or "por".
and "en la" because it is only a small part of the weekend that you did this.


Ok, correcciónes por favor.

(vivra, when you paste from word, it carries that formating stuff over with the text.  You can get rid of it by placing the cursor in front of the first visible letter you pasted and then clicking on the erasing backspace key)

October 14, 2008 from the Web.
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bobbielee85 says

I am new at this. If possible is there anyone willing to help me with spanish? Gracious

February 25, 2009 from the Web.
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cobre says

bobbielee85,

Start listening and doing the exercises in newbie lessons. Any one  of them, any combination...

Listen, write, listen, speak, repeat, repeat,

practice practice practice

Gracias is thank you, (well actually thanks as it is the plural of Gracia)

Welcome to the pod, we have a whale of a good time.

February 25, 2009 from the Web.
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